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More Faulty Parallelism in Sentences?

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I’m confused upon how to shift the following sentences to have correct correspondence though becoming different the definition of the judgment or receiving out the "not only" as well as "but also" parts.

1. Not usually was it self-evident which Elvis died fat, though he was really magnificent as well as unapproachable of his fat.

2. When the craft is about to unexpected crash, not usually is it trivial to consider of the film a single wants to watch, though additionally self-evident which a single is starting to die.


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Not only was it axiomatic that Elvis died fat, but also that he was very ostentatious and proud of his fat.

When a plane is about to suddenly crash, not only is it nugatory to think of a movie one wants to watch, but also it is axiomatic to think that one is going to die.

Such strange sentences. :)

TC wrote on November 3, 2009 - 9:10 am | Visit Link

1. Elvis not only was well known to have died fat but was also very ostentatious and proud of his fat. ("Axiomatic" is used only for scientific statements.)

2. When a plane is about to crash, it is not only worthless to think about watching a favorite movie but also dreadful to face the prospect of dying. ("Nugatory" is much too formal.)

Jimboy wrote on November 3, 2009 - 9:10 am | Visit Link

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